Tuesday, June 04, 2013

Original:

American's and Japanese have difference of feature. We can see in every aspect of our
life. American some elderly ladies dressed freely but Japanese old lady dressed similar.
In New York here are many examples about age. A person when came here have scarcely
of my age. The people think about age.
The woman when remains single beyond that age people said usually old maid. Because the people
don't married. Some different idea, different customs. American strongly describe their opinions, but
Japanese speak with consideration of others feelings. The american people is individualism, each
one think about themselves, don't care the other people. America is a big country, there are people
from many countries, however Japan is a small country. In America the people is autonomous but in
Japan no because the circumstances are different.

correction:

Americans and Japanese have differences of features. We can see this in every aspect of our
lives. In America some elderly ladies dress freely but Japanese old ladies dress similarly.
In New York there are many examples about age. A person who came here scarcely thought of
her age. 
Women in Japan who remain single beyond a certain age people usually  call an old maid. In Japan and the United States there are some different ideas and different customs. Americans strongly express their opinions, but Japanese speak with consideration of others' feelings. American people are individualistic; each one thinks about him or herself, doesn't care about other people. America is a big country,  and there are people from many countries. However, Japan is a small country. In America  people are autonomous, but in  Japan they aren't because the circumstances are different.

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