for Isabel and Carolina

Isabel and Carolina, thank you for summarizing the life of Alfredo and publishing it here on our blog. I've written it again with some changes. Please take a look at the new version (from the teacher) and compare it to the original below.


from the teacher:

Alfredo Quinonez Hinojosa is a brain surgeon, a cancer researcher and a professor at Johns Hopkins University, with a degree from Harvard Medical School.

His first home was a broken down camper truck he paid 300 hundred dollars for. One day he was sad. Tears came down  his face.

One day Alfredo's cousin told him to study English, and he went  to a community college to take English classes.  Alfredo went to Berkeley University and discovered a passion for scientific studies.

Alfredo continued to study medicine, became a doctor, and today is a neurosurgeon and professor at Johns Hopkins University.




Original:

Alfredo Quinonez Hinojosa is a brain surgeon and a cancer researcher and a professor at Johns Hopkins University, with a degree from Harvard Medical School.

His first home was a broken down camper truck he paid 300 hundred dollars for rent it. one day he was sad tears came down on his face.

One day Alfredo's cousin talk him to study English, and he went  to the community college to take English classes.  Alfredo went to Berkeley University and discovered a passion for scientist studies.

Alfredo continued to study medicine, became a doctor.  today is a neurosurgeon, professor at Johns Hopkins University.