original: A Japanese girl who lived in New York felt comfortable to live here more than
her countrybecause she had her own style and American are individualistic. That's why she
 want to live in New York. She didn't want people to regard her as a old maid. She had an
experience about old lady who couldn't live without wearing red lipstick. She said if that lady
lives in Japan, she would stop wearing that. The American people feels free to speak what
they think, express what they want to express to the public. Many american people are me-ism,
they always think of themselves first and I want to be like an american people.

Correction:
original: A Japanese girl who lived in New York felt more comfortable living here than  in
her country because she had her own style and Americans are individualistic. That's why she
 wanted to live in New York. She didn't want people to regard her as a old maid. She had an
experience about an old lady who couldn't live without wearing red lipstick. She said if that lady
lived in Japan, she would stop wearing that. The American people feel free to speak what
they think, express what they want to express to the public. Many American people are
me-istic; they always think of themselves first, and I want to be like American people.