for Ana Convers

Thanks for your sentences about Obama. I've made some changes here. Please look and compare.

From the teacher:

1. Obama is the 44th President of the United of America.
2. He is also the winner also the 2009 Nobel Peace Prize.
3. He has been very successful with his message.
4. Barack's family moved to Indonesia in 1967.

5. Obama majored in political science.

6. He worked as the director of a community project.

7. He became an Illinois Senator in 1996.

8. Obama was elected as a US Senator

9. He supported legislation on conservation.

10. Diplomacy and cooperation between peoples

From Ana:

1. Obama is 44th President of the United of America.
2. He is the winner also the 2009 Nobel Peace Prize.
3. He has been very successful with his message.
4. Barack's family moved to Indonesia in 1967

5. Obama majores in political science

6. He worked as a director of the community project

7. He became an Illinois Senator in 1996

8. Obama was elected as a US Senator

9. He supported on conservation legislation

10. Diplomacy and cooperation between peoples