Hwangmin & Cihan
My name is Hwangmin, I arrived in New York 6 Month ago. When I arrive here, everything was interesting to me. I have liked South Ferry in New York. it was very nice place, boats, sea, and wind everything was very beautiful for me.
My name is Cihan, I arrived in New York 1 years ago. My favorite place is Central Park and Chelsea.
I saw many things in the Central Park, some concert, events. It have enjoyed there during many time.
I want to go to the second college in New York. So, I'll see many things more in here.
My name is Cihan, I arrived in New York 1 years ago. My favorite place is Central Park and Chelsea.
I saw many things in the Central Park, some concert, events. It have enjoyed there during many time.
I want to go to the second college in New York. So, I'll see many things more in here.
posted by the blog at 5:08 PM
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Hwangmin and Cihan,
Thank you for your contribution to our survey. You write well about the things you have seen and enjoyed in this remarkable city.
This is a correction of your writing:
My name is Hwangmin. I arrived in New York 6 months ago. When I arrived here, everything was interesting to me. I have liked South Ferry in New York. It was a very nice place, with boats, sea, and wind; everything was very beautiful for me.
My name is Cihan. I arrived in New York 1 year ago. My favorite places are Central Park and Chelsea. I saw many things in Central Park, such as some concert and events. I have enjoyed myself there many times.
I want to go to a second college in New York, s, I'll see many things more here.
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