Lina and Altymyrat
My name is Lina and partner's name is Altymyrat. When we came in NY, we didn't like. In addition, we like now NY. In my opinion, best place is Central Park, but in my partner's opinion, best blace is Times Square.
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Lina and Altmyrat,
Arrival in New York is difficult, and it can take years to adjust, but New York becomes more and more interesting the longer you live here. We have a lot of great people, like you.
This is the correction of your writing:
My name is Lina and my partner's name is Altymyrat. When we came to N.Y., we didn't like it. However, we now like N.Y. In my opinion, the best place is Central Park, but in my partner's opinion,the best place is Times Square.
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