Bryam and Johana
We arrived in New York City on 11 January. When we arrived here, we liked this city because it's bigger than our city and you can find whatever you want. The best thing we like about New York are many different tourist places as Central Park, Flushing Park and Museums in all the city and the Subway. Bryam likes Central Park. He thinks it's an interesting places because you can take a break and enjoy walking around. Johana likes to go shopping because she thinks that New York has many different stores, styles and diversities of clothes.
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Bryam and Johana,
If New York is a great city, it is because of you and me. I didn't realize that you two arrived here on the same day.
I recommend you visit lower Manhattan, walk around- you will find diverse communities- and, if you have a chance, travel west across the country (by car, you can do it in about ten days). The space, the landscape may change how you see the world.
This is the correction of your writing (there were almost no errors):
We arrived in New York City on January 11th. When we arrived here, we liked this city because it's bigger than our city and you can find whatever you want. The best thing we like about New York are many different tourist places, such as Central Park, Flushing Park and museums in all the city and the subway. Bryam likes Central Park. He thinks it's an interesting place because you can take a break and enjoy walking around. Johana likes to go shopping because she thinks that New York has many different stores, styles and diversities of clothes.
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