When I came to New York, I like here.The best thing in New York is free.My favorite place
in here is Central Park because there is very interesting and many people.
It's good to know that you like New York. This is not an easy city and not everyone can enjoy it.
This is a correction of your writing:
When I came to New York, I liked it here.The best thing in New York is freedom.My favorite place here is Central Park because it is very interesting there and there are many people.
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Jureemas,
It's good to know that you like New York. This is not an easy city and not everyone can enjoy it.
This is a correction of your writing:
When I came to New York, I liked it here.The best thing in New York is freedom.My favorite place here is Central Park because it is very interesting there and there are many people.
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