Benz and Yuki
We are Benz and Yuki.When we came to NY first day , we didn't like here .Now, we like here a little.Yuki's parents live here.And Benz nothing!!! Our favorite place in here is Manhattan.
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Benz and Yuki,
I am glad to read the you both like New York now more than on your first day. Maybe later a little will change to a lot.
This is the correction of your writing:
We are Benz and Yuki. When we came to N.Y. the first day, we didn't like it here. Now, we like it here a little. Yuki likes that her parents live here. And Benz likes nothing here!!! Our favorite place here is Manhattan.
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