Paradee and Ruifeng.zhao
When we arrived in New York ,we liked New York.
Now we still like it.
In our opinion,we think a view of high buildings and shops for shopping are the best things in New York.
Our favorite place in New York is Manhatton.
Now we still like it.
In our opinion,we think a view of high buildings and shops for shopping are the best things in New York.
Our favorite place in New York is Manhatton.
posted by the blog at 4:29 PM
1 Comments:
Paradee and Ruifeng,
New York is only the people who live here (plus the buildings and shops they make). New York is fast-changing because people come and go. You are creating New York.
Your writing still has one small mistake. Manhattan has one wrong letter.
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