NINO KURE
I would like to introduce you to Kihyun Song. He is 21 years old and comes from Seoul, Korea. He been in New York one month ago. He likes to play guitar, and he watches movies in his computer. He is going to want to go to college. When he finish learning english, he want to start to college. He like to drink and he like to go to parties. he lives with roommate, and he has three roommates. He lives in Woodside, Queens. He is wonderful person and nice friend. so I get a good friend........
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Nino,
Thanks a lot for writing about your partner. Now let's look at corrections of your writing. This is the corrected version. Please compare it to the original:
I would like to introduce you to Kihyun Song. He is 21 years old and comes from Seoul, Korea. He been in New York since one month ago. He likes to play guitar, and he watches movies on his computer. He is going to want to go to college. When he finishes learning English, he wants to start college. He likes to drink and he likes to go to parties. He lives with roommates, who number three. He lives in Woodside, Queens. He is a wonderful person and nice friend. so I have gotten a good friend........
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