My Parther
Hello, I would like to introduce my partner. She name is Belen.She from ParaguayShe came usa just 3 weeks ago.She want to study about english skill, then she want to get a collage. She stay in new York with her family. .She have 1 older brother,1 older sister.2 younger sister. She really lovely when I talking with her. She is nice friend. Bye ..
posted by the blog at 4:50 PM
17 Comments:
I love it!!! :)
I don't think so ;)
what you say that???
I love Belen! She is the best!
Oh Really!!
I see. You love Belen. Belen loves you. This is interesting. :)
tell us more about that??
It's not me. I think It's your ..
What are you saying!!! she's nice!!
Yes... You give us more information about you
I mean nice frined.
mmm i love Cha but not that way that you thinking!!!
You tell us true.. :)
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I think she telling us the true she is a nice girl...what do u think oner??
OMG
Omer like to Belen but she is very young to him
Thanks for writing about Belen. Your enthusiasm is great.
This is the correction of your writing. Please see the differences between it and the original version:
Hello. I would like to introduce my partner. Her name is Belen. She is from Paraguay. She came to the U.S.A. just 3 weeks ago.She wants to study about English skill. Then she wants to get into a college. She stays in new York with her family. She has 1 older brother,1 older sister and 2 younger sisters. She is really lovely when I talk with her. She is a nice friend. Bye ..
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