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I would like to introduce to Dayanne. She is 19 years old and comes from Peru. She arrived here around 1 year and half ago. She wants to go to college and she wants to be Veterinary. She has dream to made a shelter. She would like music, history and sports but she hate basketball. Because her grandma force her to go to basketball team.
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Nineteen is a very young age to begin a new life. So is seventeen and a half, which was Dayanne's age when she came here.
When you say that she has a dream of making a shelter, do you mean an animal shelter?
How did her interest in animals begin?
What kind of history interests Dayannne? Does she know a lot about the history of Peru? It is a rich story, I think.
Basketball is a great sport! But the New York team (the Knicks) isn't great this year, so Dayanne isn't missing anything. The baseball season is coming soon.
Thanks for introducing Dayanne. This is the correction of your introduction. Please look and compare it with the original:
I would like to introduce you to Dayanne. She is 19 years old and comes from Peru. She arrived here around 1 year and a half ago. She wants to go to college and she wants to be Veterinarian. She has dreams of making a shelter. She likes music, history and sports, but she hates basketball because her grandma forced her to go to a basketball team.
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