Hello everybody!! I would like to introduce you my lovely partner Cha Boon! She's 21 years old, She is from Ayuthaya, Phra Nakhon Si Ayutthaya, Thailand. She arrived in New York one months ago, She likes the music pop and she work here In New York in a Tailand restaurant that i know about my partner! Okay! Bye! see you guys!
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It's me. Thank you Belen
youre welcome!!!! :)
I know she is cool~.^^ I want to Know Where the Tailand restaurant is. I like Tailand food!!!
Thanks, Belen (assuming you are the writer) for writing about your partner, Cha Boon.
I've corrected your writing. This is the correction. Please compare it with the original:
Hello everybody!! I would like to introduce you to my lovely partner, Cha Boon! She's 21 years old, She is from Ayuthaya, Phra Nakhon Si Ayutthaya, Thailand. She arrived in New York one month ago, She likes pop music, and she work here In New York in a Thai restaurant. That's what I know about my partner! Okay! Bye! See you guys!
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