Thursday, January 19, 2012

My partner oner

My partner onerhe is from turkey.He came to new york 8 months ago.He likes new york and he plain to stay here for long time.He working like salesman he wanted to go to the college to stady computer science he also like to read everyday.he loves the womens!!

2 Comments:

Blogger the blog said...

I think last sentences is joking!!!!

Thu Jan 19, 04:48:00 PM  
Blogger the blog said...

Welcome, Oner!

This is a correction of the writing about Oner. The writer should look and see the differences from his (or her) writing:

My partner, Oner, is from Turkey.He came to new york 8 months ago.He likes New York, and he plans to stay here for a long time. He is working as a salesman. He wants to go to college to study computer science. He also like to read everyday. He loves women!!

Fri Jan 20, 07:52:00 PM  

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