My new partner
My partner is Peter. He is 21 years old. He likes New York. He arrived to New York 1 year ago. He has a job. He works at Omnia Cafe. He likes to soccer and basketball. He reads newspaper everyday. He want to go to college for business. He likes read to history book.
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He is handsome. If you want5 to meet him. I can give you him number...
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Thanks for writing about Peter. Who is the writer? (you didn't put your name).
This is a correction of your writing. Please look at it and see differences (corrections):
My partner is Peter. He is 21 years old. He likes New York. He arrived in New York 1 year ago. He has a job. He works at Omnia Cafe. He likes to play soccer and basketball. He reads a newspaper everyday. He want to go to college for business. He likes reading history books.
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