Keisuke Shimizu
Hi Kevin.How are you?
I would like to introduce about my partner Shin Seung Hoon.
He is from Korea.And now he lives in NY with his uncle.
And he is 24years old.He came here January 2.
So he has been here for 2weeks.
He came here to speak English like a native speaker.
He is interested in playing Billard and Basketball.
He does not have a job,he just want to study English hardly.
In future he wants to be a scientist.Science is his major.And he think that he wants to transfer nexy grade college named pht.
He reads newspaper every morning.When he was belong to army in his country,he had a lot of free time.So he read many books.
He prefer to read fiction.Because just be fun.
Of couse he interested in sports.He knows the result soccer game ,too.
He reads daily News on-line.
He loves New York City.In here,there are many Koreans so there are Korean towns.
His educational plan is until fall session he wants to study English in here.
He loves soccer ,too.His favorite team is FC Barcelona.
He wants to see this team's game in Barcelona,Spain.
That's all in this time.
I want to know about my classmates more and more.
Thank you for reading.
Have a good weekend.
Keisuke Shimizu
I would like to introduce about my partner Shin Seung Hoon.
He is from Korea.And now he lives in NY with his uncle.
And he is 24years old.He came here January 2.
So he has been here for 2weeks.
He came here to speak English like a native speaker.
He is interested in playing Billard and Basketball.
He does not have a job,he just want to study English hardly.
In future he wants to be a scientist.Science is his major.And he think that he wants to transfer nexy grade college named pht.
He reads newspaper every morning.When he was belong to army in his country,he had a lot of free time.So he read many books.
He prefer to read fiction.Because just be fun.
Of couse he interested in sports.He knows the result soccer game ,too.
He reads daily News on-line.
He loves New York City.In here,there are many Koreans so there are Korean towns.
His educational plan is until fall session he wants to study English in here.
He loves soccer ,too.His favorite team is FC Barcelona.
He wants to see this team's game in Barcelona,Spain.
That's all in this time.
I want to know about my classmates more and more.
Thank you for reading.
Have a good weekend.
Keisuke Shimizu
posted by the blog at 10:01 PM
1 Comments:
Keisuke, thanks for your greeting and for introducing Shin Seung Hoon.
I've made some corrections in your writing. Please compare this new version with the original version:
Hi Kevin. How are you?
I would like to introduce my partner, Shin Seung Hoon.
He is from Korea, and now he lives in N.Y. with his uncle.
He is 24 years old. He came here on January 2nd, so he has been here for 2 weeks.
He came here to speak English like a native speaker.
He is interested in playing billiards and basketball.
He does not have a job; he just wants to study English hard.
In the future he wants to be a scientist. Science is his major.And he think that he wants to get a higher degree in college, called a Ph.D.
He reads a newspaper every morning.When he belonged to the army in his country,he had a lot of free time, so he read many books.
He prefers to read fiction because it is just fun.
Of course, he is interested in sports.He knows the results of soccer game ,too.
He reads daily news on-line.
He loves New York City.There are many Koreans here, so there are Korean towns.
His educational plan is to study English here until fall session.
He loves soccer ,too.His favorite team is FC Barcelona. He wants to see this team's game in Barcelona, Spain.
That's all at this time.
I want to know about my classmates more and more.
Thank you for reading.
Have a good weekend.
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