Erika Idrovo
hello everybody I introduce my classmate Bayalin. She is 28 years old and come from Dominican Republic. she arrive in Ny 1 years ago. she likes live in Ny but she doesn't like the weather especially the cold. She work how cashier whith jamaica people but She think change the job because is very hard. She think in the future study a career. She sometimes like made exercises and read not fiction books. She live whit her family. She likes italian food. She is very cheerful and social is a good friend. Bayalin loves dancing and listening a lot of music, my friend don't have pets because don't like. She is very nice and lovely.
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Bayalin looks a good friend. By the way, why dosen't she like pets?
Erika, thanks for writing about Bayalin. This is the correction of your writing. If you look, you will find some differences:
Hello, everybody. I am going to introduce my classmate, Bayalin. She is 28 years old and comes from the Dominican Republic. She arrived in N.Y. 1 year ago. She likes living in N.Y., but she doesn't like the weather, especially the cold. She works as a cashier with Jamaican people, but she is thinking about changing the job because it is very hard. She thinks about studying for a career in the future. She sometimes likes to do exercises and read non-fiction books. She lives with her family. She likes Italian food. She is very cheerful and social and is a good friend. Bayalin loves dancing and listening to a lot of music. My friend doesn't have pets because she doesn't like them. She is very nice and lovely.
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