Thursday, May 26, 2011

Xerox PARC, Apple, and the creation of the personal computer___Marina

Reading the article, in 1970  Xerox Corporation had been the world’s greatest computer engineers and programmers more then ten years, and built of innovation and invention. In 1979 Steve Jobs came to Xerox took some new informatin and raced back to Apple (in that time Apple was one of the hottest tech firms). Jobs changed next generation of personal computers different course. I think just very smart people can manage the creative process. Everything depend of which corporation have this kind of people. Apple lacky because it has.

posted by the blog at 5:15 AM

2 Comments:

Blogger the blog said...

Marina,

Your summary has most of the main ideas but you missed an important one, which is that creative innovation is collaborative. Steve Jobs is very smart and inventive, but even he needed the help of the Xerox Corporation, which did research he could use.

This is the correction of your writing (it's pretty good grammatically)

Reading the article, in 1970 the Xerox Corporation had had the world’s greatest computer engineers and programmers for more than ten years, and built from innovation and invention. In 1979 Steve Jobs came to Xerox, took some new information and raced back to Apple (at that time Apple was one of the hottest tech firms). Jobs changed the next generation of personal computers to a different course. I think just very smart people can manage the creative process. Everything depends on which corporations have this kind of people. Apple is lucky because it has.

Thu May 26, 02:08:00 PM  
Blogger the blog said...

thanks for correction Kevin!

Mon Jun 06, 08:06:00 PM  

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