Steven Jobs------by Araceli
In 1970 Xerox Parc had innovated an arm of the Xerox Corporation. By 1979 Apple became in the first company with most tech in computers. Jobs made a deal with Xerox but this failures adding mouse, icons and windows because they were slow and underpowered. Then Jobs came back to apple and demanded Xerox for changed course. Now in apple he invented Macintosh. Starkweather who help to created the laser printer was hired by Jobs and now we are joining apple.
posted by the blog at 3:33 AM
1 Comments:
Araceli,
You have correctly identified the main ideas of the article. Your summary reflects comprehension of very advanced article.
This is the correction of your writing. I simplified some sentences and changed a few:
In 1970 Xerox Parc had innovated an arm of the Xerox Corporation. By 1979 Apple became one of the first companies with most advanced computer technology. Jobs made a deal with Xerox, which had failures adding mouse, icons and windows because they were slow and underpowered. Then Jobs came back to Apple, where he invented Macintosh. Starkweather, who helped to creat the laser printer, was hired by Jobs and joined Apple.
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