Xerox PARC, Apple, and the truth about innovation_Songmin
If Xerox realized the potential of the personal computer industry, sustainable develpment and investment,Xerox would have won in the computer industry.(Xerox could have mastered all of today's computer industry.)
In 1980s, Jobs found some major PARC researchers to participate in his company to fully developed this concept and succeeded.
In 1980s, Jobs found some major PARC researchers to participate in his company to fully developed this concept and succeeded.
posted by the blog at 9:19 PM
1 Comments:
Songmin,
You have found the main idea of an interesting but difficult article, one which has a lot of specialized vocabulary and grammar,which makes it hard to see what the writer is saying. You also used the past unreal conditional.
I found two errors:
-If Xerox realized- If Xerox had realized
-to fully developed- to fully develop
You are proficient in Chinese as well as English- and of course Korean. I wonder if knowing Chinese has made it easier for you to learn English.
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