PASSIVE VOICE BY LEO
The president is elected by people of United States of America once every four years. The president can be re-elected one time. If the law is broken by the president. He can be removed from his office. In the history of United States of America, the people have been removed from office one president despite many laws having been broken.
The industry that most people are employed in in United States of America are technology. A lot of softwares are produced in this country. Softwares are exported to South America, and flowers are imported from Ecuador. Macintosh brand was invented by an American person.
The industry that most people are employed in in United States of America are technology. A lot of softwares are produced in this country. Softwares are exported to South America, and flowers are imported from Ecuador. Macintosh brand was invented by an American person.
posted by the blog at 12:06 PM
1 Comments:
Leo,
This is fine. Again, I encourage you to check pronunciation. This sentence needs a comma instead of a period in the middle: "If the law is broken by the president. He can be removed from his office."
These are some minor errors:
-the people have been removed from office one president (One president has been removed from office by the president).
-United States (the United States)
-softwares (software)
-Macintosh brand (The Macintosh brand) or just (Macintosh)
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