passive .... by jenny sarria
The president is elected by people of United States of America once every four years. The president can be re-elected one time. If the law is broken by the president. He can be removed from his office. In the history of United States of America, the people have been removed from office one president despite many laws having been broken.
The industry that most people are employed in in United States of America are lawers and Doctors. A lot of corn are produced in this country. Movies are exported to South America, and coffe are imported from Colombia. Macintosh brand was invented by an American person.
English spoken by most of the people but,Spanish and Chainesse are spoken alot, residents of the U.S.A. hamburgges are usually eten by them, for dinner they prefer chiken in the other hand. The peoplpe in the U.S.A. are concerned about economy and secuerity during the dinner. The price of the gas and jobs are often discossed by the family.
The industry that most people are employed in in United States of America are lawers and Doctors. A lot of corn are produced in this country. Movies are exported to South America, and coffe are imported from Colombia. Macintosh brand was invented by an American person.
English spoken by most of the people but,Spanish and Chainesse are spoken alot, residents of the U.S.A. hamburgges are usually eten by them, for dinner they prefer chiken in the other hand. The peoplpe in the U.S.A. are concerned about economy and secuerity during the dinner. The price of the gas and jobs are often discossed by the family.
posted by Jenny Sarria at 12:23 PM
2 Comments:
Jenny,
Good to get your homework. And this time I won't confuse it with another student's also named Jenny!
These are corrections of your passive voice message.
-United States (The United States)
- broken by the president. He can (broken by the president, he can)
-the people have been removed from office one president (one president has been removed from office by the people)
-lawyers and Doctors (law and medicine)
-corn are (corn is)
coffee are (coffee is)
-Macintosh brand (the Macintosh brand) or (Macintosh)
-English spoken (English is spoken)
-alot (a lot)
-hamburgges are usually eten by them, for dinner they prefer chiken in the other hand (this needs spelling and punctuation correction)
The last two sentences are correct, but there is one spelling mistake. I recommend you check spelling. The computer can do it for you, of course.
I have a lot of mistakes, I'm sorry I try to do well but I don't have time to do my homework.....
The president is elected by people of The United States of America once every four years. The president can be re-elected one time. If the law is broken by the president, he can be removed from his office. In the history of United States of America, one president has been removed from office by the people.
The industry that most people are employed in in The United States of America is law and Medicine. A lot of corn is produced in this country. Movies are exported to South America, and coffe is imported from Colombia. The Macintosh brand was invented by an American person.
English is spoken by most of the people but,Spanish and Chainesse are spoken a lot of residents of the U.S.A. Hamburgers are usually eaten by them, for dinner they prefer chiken in the other hand. The peoplpe in the U.S.A. are concerned about economy and security during the dinner.
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