Tuesday, May 24, 2011

Xerox PARC, Apple, and the truth about innovation_____MONICA

Steven Jobs created a personal computer model with windows, after that Xerox withdrew its PARC’s prized personal computer which was slow and underpowered. Many people can believe that Jobs stole the personal computer from Xerox, and other people can think that he and Apple adapted some of Xerox PARC’s ideas for a different audience.

posted by the blog at 1:07 AM

1 Comments:

Blogger the blog said...

Monica,

Your writing is clear and grammatically correct. Also, the ideas you express are accurate.

Another idea the author (Malcolm Gladwell) proposed is that Steve Jobs may have gotten ideas from Xerox PARC, but he used them in a very original way. Gladwell suggests that innovation is usually collaborative. A community of people create an idea. No individual can alone.


The only error I can see is that it needs a period (.), not a comma (,) between "windows" and "after."

You have read and understood a very difficult article.

Tue May 24, 01:31:00 AM  

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