"The Unite States in Passive voice by Lina"
A presidente is elected one every four years by people in the Unite State. The president can be re-elected by them two times. If the law is broken by the president he o she can be removed from office by the people many more laws having been broken. In the history of the United States one presidente have been.
The Industries the must people in the Unite States are employed by Bussines and Administration. A lot of corn are produced by the country. Movies is exported to whole word and flowers from the Colombia is imported by it.
In the Unite States English is spoken by most of the people, but Spanish an Polish are spoken a lot.
Hamburgues usually eaten for lunch by residentes of the USA for dinner.
People in the USA are concerned about the economy and security. During dinner, the jobs and security are often discussed by families in the U.S
The Industries the must people in the Unite States are employed by Bussines and Administration. A lot of corn are produced by the country. Movies is exported to whole word and flowers from the Colombia is imported by it.
In the Unite States English is spoken by most of the people, but Spanish an Polish are spoken a lot.
Hamburgues usually eaten for lunch by residentes of the USA for dinner.
People in the USA are concerned about the economy and security. During dinner, the jobs and security are often discussed by families in the U.S
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A presidente is elected one every four years by the people in the Unite States. The president can be re-elected by them two times. If the law is broken by the president he or she can be removed. In the history of the United States one presidente has been removed from office.
Bussines and administration are the industries that employed the most people in the united states. A lot of corn is produced by the country. Movies are exported to the whole world. Flowers are imported from colombia.
In the united states english is spoken by most people, but spanish and polish are spoken a lot too.
Hamburgers are usually eaten for lunch and dinner by the residents of U.S.
People in the USA are concerned about the econmy and security. This are often discussed during dinner by the families of the U.S.
Lina,
Your homework is well-written. 90% is correct.
Here are some corrections:
-one every (once every)
-people many (people, despite many)
-one president have been (one president has been removed from office)
-employed by are business and administration.
-Corn is produced
-Movies are exported
-Hamburgers are usually eaten
-concerned about the economy
-During dinner, jobs and security
Joan,
Your correction is excellent. You missed just a few things, though.
-In English, it's "president" with no "e" at the end.
-"Business" is the correct spelling
"Colombia" a begins with a capital "C" because it is a country. Also, "English" has a capital "E." It's the same with the United States.
In conclusion, you need to work on capital letters. Your grammar is all correct. Thanks for your contribution!
Kevin (the teacher)
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