Friday, May 20, 2011

The story of the U.S.A. in passive voice by Pedro.

the president is elected once every four years by the people in the U.S.A. The President can bere- elected by the people two times. If the law is broken by the President he or she can be removed from office by them,in the history of the U.S.A.. one president have been removed from office despite many more having broken laws. In the industries of the U.S.A. most of the people are emlpeyed by bissness administration and doctors. Corn is produced alot by the Contry, movies are exported to the hold world and from Colombia flawers are  imported.In the U.S.A. English spoken by most of the people but,Spanish and Chainesse are spoken alot  residents of the U.S.A. hamburgges are usually eten by them, for dinner they prefer chiken in the other hand. The peoplpe in the U.S.A. are concerned about economy and secuerity during the dinner. The price of the gas and jobs are often discossed by the family.

1 Comments:

Blogger the blog said...

Pedro,

This is good. Let me see if there are any errors. Just a minute..

-President is not capitalized in English (it's president, unless you use the name, for example President Obama.

-You should have a period (.) between "them" and"In the history"

-one president have (has)

-employed by business administration and doctors- (employed in business administration and as doctors)


-during the dinner. The price of the gas and jobs are often discussed by the family (during dinner, the price of gas and jobs are often discussed by the family.


It's written well. There are just a few errors. You clearly understand the passive voice. Some of the spelling has mistakes. I recommend you use "spell check" on the computer.

Fri May 20, 07:07:00 PM  

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