Thursday, April 28, 2011

Diabetes in U S A Fredy

Centers for Disease Control and Prevention (CDCP) made a study where show that the rate of diabetes was doubled between 2005 - 2007 in compare to the years 1995 and 1997. It also showed that almost the 8 percent of the population in USA have diabetes, and the reason is that American people do not have the good habits such a: eat healthy food or at list eat more food made at home and making more exercise daily.

1 Comments:

Blogger the blog said...

Fredy,

The information is good. You understood the article and reported the ideas accurately. But let me make a few corrections:

-made a study which (or "that") shows...

-2007 compared to

-almost 8 percent

-do not have good habits

-such as eating...at least eating... and doing more...

These are small errors. You're doing great, Fredy.

Thu Apr 28, 02:07:00 PM  

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