Diabetes in U.S. rising sharply_Songmin
In the U.S. more people have diabetes than in the past.
The only way for America to control the diabetes is to change their lifestyles. But Americans showed no signs for changing their eating and exercise habits. Hopefully americans can reverse the trend.
The only way for America to control the diabetes is to change their lifestyles. But Americans showed no signs for changing their eating and exercise habits. Hopefully americans can reverse the trend.
posted by the blog at 12:16 AM
1 Comments:
Songmin,
Your summary touches the main points. Each of your sentences has important, new information, so the summary moves well from the beginning to its conclusion.
One correction: There is always a comma (,) after "Hopefully" and words like it:
Hopefully, it will not rain tomorrow.
However, the weather forecast is dire.
Fortunately, there is little chance of rain on the weekend.
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