DIABETES IS A BIG PROBLEM IN U.S..... BY MONICA
Actually, American people are leading unhealthier lifestyles because they are eating more fast food than healthy food and they are doing less exercises. For this reason, the rate of obesity and diabetes have increased steeply in U.S. The Americans should learn about good eating habits and do the things that are good for them, if they want to control the diabetes.
posted by the blog at 2:37 AM
1 Comments:
Monica,
This is a nearly perfect summary of the article. You created some effective sentences to communicate the ideas.
correction:
In English, "actually" means "really."
A better choice here would be "these days" or "nowadays" or "at present"
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