Thursday, April 28, 2011

Diabetes is a big problem in USA

American people have epidemic of deabetes, approximatly 10% of population has this disease. The couse of the obesity are eating and exercise habits. American's prefer eat at fast food restaurant and get less exercise. American's people are not educated about changing their lifestyles. Because education is necessary to reduce diabetes level i the USA.

by Marina

1 Comments:

Blogger the blog said...

Marina,

This summary gives the important points of the article.

some corrections are:

-prefer eating

-restaurants

-omit "Because" in the last sentence

Thu Apr 28, 12:14:00 PM  

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