Joanne's summary---------------Diabetes in U.S. rising sharply
According to the U.S. Centers for Disease Control and Prevention (CDCP),the level of diabetes has increased sharply in past 10years. This is a flood of America. Experts say that one of the biggest reasons for increasing diabetes is obesity. Obesity causes by bad eating habit and life style. Now, about 8% of Americans are diabetics. America’s health service is burdening by it. Experts say educate people about the dangers of the disease is the only way about not increasing levels of diabetes. A diabetes specialist warned because Americans are not trying to change thier life style healthier, the numbers of diabetics still will rise sharply.
1 Comments:
Joanne,
This is an accurate, thorough summary.
I see a grammar problem: passive voice (be+ past participle):
The correct sentences would be:
-Obesity is caused by bad....
-America's health service is burdened by it (or: America's health service is being burdened by it.
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