Saturday, November 06, 2010

Iwona Mielnik

My sister decided not get married two months ago.Apparently,she had been health problems that had led to financial problems as well. I encouraged her to speak with professional doctors or a psychologist,but Anna refused.Our parents and fiance felt mortified that they could not convince her to get counseling before making the decision not to get married. We are worried that eventually Anna will regret her decision and we hope she change her mind before it is to late.

1 Comments:

Blogger the blog said...

Iwonna,

The writing is good.

Corrections: decided not TO get married.

We hope she WILL change her mind before it is TOO late.

Just three minor errors. Good work!

Thu Nov 11, 01:51:00 PM  

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