Saturday, November 06, 2010

a sad idea, by Jessica L and Jhon

Our friend Sophia decided to get an abortion 8 months ago.Apparently, she had been worried for about one week the prior to making this decision. We understand she had been having financial problems that had led to family problems as well. Sophia's friends encouraged her to speak with a psychologist, but unfortunately Sophia refused. her friends and her boyfriend feel bad that they could not convince her to get counseling before making the decision to get an abortion. they are worried that eventually Sophia will regret her decision and will wish she had her baby.

1 Comments:

Blogger the blog said...

Jessica and Jhon,

Let me show you some corrections (if I can find any):

One week the prior to (eliminate "the")

..refused. her friends.. (Capital H in "Her")

Also, "They" in "They are worried" needs a capital T.

Sat Nov 06, 03:05:00 PM  

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