Jin
Interview with Andrei
There are many people in their native coutries hold highly professional jobs,
but here is America.They have to start from zero.In America,many America native
companies don't really admit other countries degrees,so they have to learn again
in American universities or collages.I don,t think Andrei is in trouble because
allmost all of immigrants are as doing as Adrei.If he keeps going,i think he will
be success in the future.His dream will come true.
There are many people in their native coutries hold highly professional jobs,
but here is America.They have to start from zero.In America,many America native
companies don't really admit other countries degrees,so they have to learn again
in American universities or collages.I don,t think Andrei is in trouble because
allmost all of immigrants are as doing as Adrei.If he keeps going,i think he will
be success in the future.His dream will come true.
posted by the blog at 1:19 PM
1 Comments:
Jin,
Like Silvia, you chose to write a commentary on the article instead of describing the story itself in detail.
I made some corrections to your grammar. The first sentence grammar is very interesting. See if you understand how I have corrected it.
There are many people who hold highly professional jobs in their native countries but here in America have to start from zero.In America, many America native
companies don't really admit other countries' degrees,so they have to learn again in American universities or colleges.I don,t think Andrei is in trouble because
almost all immigrants are doing as he is.If he keeps going,i think he will succeed in the future.His dream will come true.
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