MAH
Andrei is a 50 years old Russian man immigrant in the USA. He had a very good job in his contry . he was an engineer, and he had an conforteble life in his contry.
first he didin't want to be an engineer,but a lutterair. his parents forced him to study engineery,and he thanks them today for that. unfortinatly he is not doing his job here. he is at the highway constraction,and he is very depressed.
first he didin't want to be an engineer,but a lutterair. his parents forced him to study engineery,and he thanks them today for that. unfortinatly he is not doing his job here. he is at the highway constraction,and he is very depressed.
posted by the blog at 12:45 PM
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Mah,
I made some corrections of your summary. The grammar is pretty good but the ending is abrupt. If I wrote it, I would end with a sentence about his dreams of the future.
Andrei is a Russian immigrant in the USA. He is in his early fifties. He had a very good job in his country . He was an engineer, and he had an comfortable life.
At first, he didn't want to be an engineer but a linguist. His parents forced him to study engineering,and he thanks them today for that. Unfortunately, he is not doing his job here. He is cleaning,and he is very depressed.
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