silvia
The Andrei's case i similar to the cases or many people who came to this country to reach the American dream. A lot of people with an important career have to work in job that they never expect in their countries. but when you have a dream, like Andrei, you have to sacrifices some things. Andrei dreams with to study Languages. Therefore, he is doing everything to reach his dream.
The most important thing is that you feel happy and no regret with your life. maybe in the future, when Andrei look his past life, he will say that his job like a cleaner man was good because his dream comes true.
The most important thing is that you feel happy and no regret with your life. maybe in the future, when Andrei look his past life, he will say that his job like a cleaner man was good because his dream comes true.
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Silvia,
I like that you wrote not just about the information in the story but also about the ideas. You added your own thoughts in a way that made your summary more interesting than the article itself.
Grammar was good. I made some corrections below.
Andrei's case is similar to the cases of many people who came to this country to reach the American dream. A lot of people with an important career have to work at jobs that they never expected in their countries. But when you have a dream, like Andrei, you have to sacrifice some things. Andrei dreams to study languages. Therefore, he is doing everything to reach his dream.
The most important thing is that you feel happy and no regrets about your life. Maybe in the future, when Andrei looks at his past life, he will say that his job as a cleaner man was good because his dream comes true.
Here's a tip:
Andrei's CASE is similar to THE CASES of many people who came to this country to reach the American dream.
That sentence is correct, but you can also avoid repeating the word "case' this way:
Andrei's CASE is similar to THOSE of many people who came to this country to reach the American dream.
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