Jonathan
Every day are arriving to the United States lots of airplains with people looking for more progress oportunities. Like Andrei, some people have already a profession when they come, but is so hard to find a job in what they want. The most of them have to start cleaning or doing something that they don't like. I think, those immigrants who want to progress in United States must to work hard, and also to study, if they want to work in their field.
posted by the blog at 1:14 PM
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Jonathan,
Yes, and we must keep the airplanes coming. Immigrants have always been the life blood of this country. If my grandmother hadn't come here, this class wouldn't have as great a teacher.
I corrected your summary below. The last sentence bothered me a little:
You wrote:
"I think those immigrants who want to progress in United States must work hard and also study, if they want to work in their field."
There is some redundancy. I might change the sentence to this:
"I think those immigrants who want to progress in United States must work hard and also study, especially if they want to work in their field.
Every day lots of airplanes are arriving in the United States with people looking for more progress and opportunities. Like Andrei, some people already have a profession when they come, but it is so hard to find a job in what they want. Most of them have to start cleaning or doing something that they don't like. I think those immigrants who want to progress in United States must work hard and also study, if they want to work in their field.
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