Thursday, March 12, 2009

Yeon Sook

Andrei is came from Russian and he went to college. He worked Railroad Company in Russia and was happy, but now his job is a cleaning man. He want to became a translator and to be a teacher of Russian literature. He studies during the day and works at night.

So many people come to the United States for attainment of their dream like Andrei. Some of them was graduated from college & university and they lived comfortably in their country. However, after they came to the United States, in the first time, they get a job that needed hard labor in first time, and almost all of them live very hard in the United States. I also know that finding a job in the United States is not easy. I don't know why they come to United States, here is not only comfortable but job is also very hard. Therefore, I will go back to my country.

1 Comments:

Blogger the blog said...

Yeon Sook,

You write eloquently about Andrei. You use appropriate vocabulary in grammatically correct sentences.

I think people like Andrei come to the United States even though life here is so hard because they feel there are more chances for the future than in their own country. The economic situation now is making a lot of people reconsider.

I made some corrections to your summary and copied it below.

Andrei came from Russian and he went to college. He worked for a railroad company in Russia and was happy, but now his job is a cleaning man. He wants to became a translator and to be a teacher of Russian literature. He studies during the day and works at night.

So many people come to the United States for attainment of their dream like Andrei. Some of them had graduated from college & university and they lived comfortably in their country. However, after they came to the United States, at first they got a job that needed hard labor and almost all of them lived very hard in the United States. I also know that finding a job in the United States is not easy. I don't know why they come to United States, if it is not only comfortable but the job is also very hard. Therefore, I will go back to my country.

Thu Mar 12, 02:18:00 PM  

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