Tuesday, May 03, 2016

from Rihmet, Jung Eun and Li Zhou

Alfredo Hinojosa

He was bored in Mexican.

He was born in Mexico.

He became a migrant farm worker.

Correct.

Alfredo Hinojosa continued his schooling and became a teacher.

Correct.

Be careful to leave more space between the words you write.

Today he is a neurosurgeon and professor at Johns Hopkins University

Correct, but the sentence needs a period (.) at the end.

Today he is a neurosurgeon and professor at Johns Hopkins University.

He realized it was time to move on

This sentence also lacks a period.


He realized it was time to move on.


Correct

He signed up for English classes at a community college where a teacher encouraged. him to attend the University of California.

Almost correct. There shouldn't be a period after encouraged. This is not two sentences. It is one sentence.


He signed up for English classes at a community college where a teacher encouraged him to attend the University of California.

It's good you made capital letters in all the correct places.



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