from Rihmet, Jung Eun and Li Zhou
Alfredo Hinojosa
He was bored in Mexican.
He was born in Mexico.
He became a migrant farm worker.
Correct.
Alfredo Hinojosa continued his schooling and became a teacher.
Correct.
Be careful to leave more space between the words you write.
Today he is a neurosurgeon and professor at Johns Hopkins University
Correct, but the sentence needs a period (.) at the end.
Today he is a neurosurgeon and professor at Johns Hopkins University.
He realized it was time to move on
This sentence also lacks a period.
He realized it was time to move on.
Correct
He signed up for English classes at a community college where a teacher encouraged. him to attend the University of California.
Almost correct. There shouldn't be a period after encouraged. This is not two sentences. It is one sentence.
He signed up for English classes at a community college where a teacher encouraged him to attend the University of California.
It's good you made capital letters in all the correct places.
He was bored in Mexican.
He was born in Mexico.
He became a migrant farm worker.
Correct.
Alfredo Hinojosa continued his schooling and became a teacher.
Correct.
Be careful to leave more space between the words you write.
Today he is a neurosurgeon and professor at Johns Hopkins University
Correct, but the sentence needs a period (.) at the end.
Today he is a neurosurgeon and professor at Johns Hopkins University.
He realized it was time to move on
This sentence also lacks a period.
He realized it was time to move on.
Correct
He signed up for English classes at a community college where a teacher encouraged. him to attend the University of California.
Almost correct. There shouldn't be a period after encouraged. This is not two sentences. It is one sentence.
He signed up for English classes at a community college where a teacher encouraged him to attend the University of California.
It's good you made capital letters in all the correct places.
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