Gladys and Erika

Barack Obama, who is the 44th President of the United States of America, is also the winner of the 2009 Nobel Peace Prize. Obama who made history in 2008 when he won the U.S. presidential election, is the first African American to be President.Obama who is charisma, intelligence, and powerful speeches have made him extremely popular with many Americans, has been very successful with his message for change.

There should be a comma between Obama and who (in two places)

"who is" should change to "whose" (possessive)


The first sentence is correct. The second sentence needs "whose" and a comma after "Obama." I suggest you try to repair it before looking at my correction below.

original: Obama who is charisma, intelligence, and powerful speeches have made him extremely popular with many Americans, has been very successful with his message for change.

correction: Obama, whose charisma, intelligence, and powerful speeches have made him extremely popular with many Americans, has been very successful with his message for change.


Also, you should leave a space after every period (.)


no space (incorrect): the first African American to be President.Obama

space (correct): the first African American to be President. Obama


That's a very small error, but it's good to eliminate it.