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                                                                                                                                                                         Barack Obama, who is the 44th president of the united state of America, is also the winner of the
2009 Nobel Peace Prize. Obama made history in 2008 when he won the u.s. Presidential election.


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is the first African American to be President. whose charisma, intelligence, and powerful speeches


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Obama, whose charisma, intelligence, and powerful speeches have made him extremely popular with some American people, made history in 2008 when he won the U.S. Presidential election.