Hello!

I am going to talk about my classmate Leonor. She has been living in New York for three years. She is single and she lives alone. She likes to help people and so why she adopted two children from South America. She is working and likes her job a lot, but she thinks living in New York more expensive than her country. Before she came to New York, Leonor had lived in Chile. Her goal is learn English as soon as possible and live easily in the US. If she were Obama, she would give the right immigration reform. 


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I am going to talk about my classmate Leonor. (correct)

She has been living in New York for three years. (correct)

She is single and she lives alone. (correct)

She likes to help people and so why she adopted two children from South America.

-She likes to help people, so she adopted two children from South America.

She is working and likes her job a lot, but she thinks living in New York more expensive than her country.

-She is working and likes her job a lot, but she thinks living in New York is more expensive than her country.

Before she came to New York, Leonor had lived in Chile. (correct)

Her goal is learn English as soon as possible and live easily in the US. (correct!)

If she were Obama, she would give the right immigration reform. (correct)