About my partner Soren:

1. Soren lives and works in Queens.

2. He has been there for 15 years.

3. Soren plans to stay in New York for all his life.

4. He worries about his english, he really like to be bilinguan.

5. Last year he and his family went to Colombia.

6. Before he came to New York, Soren had lived in Colombia.

7. His goal is to be a great dad and husband.

8. If Soren were Obama, he would like to change the emigrations politic.

About myself:

1. I live and work in Queens, NY.

2. I have been here for 6 months.

3. I plan to stay in New York to July.

4. He worries about his english, he really like to be bilinguan.

5. Last year he and his family went to Colombia.

6. Before he came to New York, Soren had lived in Colombia.

7. His goal is to be a great dad and husband.

8. If Soren were Obama, he would like to change the emigrations politic.

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Corrections:

1. Soren lives and works in Queens. correct

2. He has been there for 15 years. correct

3. Soren plans to stay in New York for all his life. correct

4. He worries about his english, he really like to be bilinguan.

- He worries about his English. He would really like to be bilingual. 

5. Last year he and his family went to Colombia. correct

6. Before he came to New York, Soren had lived in Colombia. correct

7. His goal is to be a great dad and husband. correct

8. If Soren were Obama, he would like to change the emigrations politic.

--If Soren were Obama, he would like to change the immigration policy. 

About myself:

1. I live and work in Queens, NY. correct

2. I have been here for 6 months. correct

3. I plan to stay in New York to July. correct

4. He worries about his english, he really like to be bilinguan.

He worries about his English. He would really like to be bilingual. 

5. Last year he and his family went to Colombia. correct

6. Before he came to New York, Soren had lived in Colombia. correct

7. His goal is to be a great dad and husband. correct

8. If Soren were Obama, he would like to change the emigrations politic.

(see the correction for number 8 above. It's the same)