My classmate Eddie lives and works in New York. He has been here for over eighteen years. He plans to stay in New York a long time. He worries every day about problems in New York, such as the high cost of living. Last year he and his family went to Mexico for vacation. Before he came to New York, Eddie had lived in Dominican Republic. His goal is to be a good husband and father, he want to learn very good English and find better job. If he were Obama, he would give health insurance for free for everybody.

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My classmate Eddie lives and works in New York. (correct)

He has been here for over eighteen years. (correct)

He plans to stay in New York a long time. (correct)

He worries every day about problems in New York, such as the high cost of living. (correct)

 Last year he and his family went to Mexico for vacation. (correct)

Before he came to New York, Eddie had lived in Dominican Republic.

-Before he came to New York, Eddie had lived in the Dominican Republic.

His goal is to be a good husband and father, he want to learn very good English and find better job.

His goal is to be a good husband and father. He wants to learn very good English and find a better job.

(note: Use a period (.) not a comma (,) between sentences.

If he were Obama, he would give health insurance for free for everybody. (correct)