Sunday, January 25, 2015





History about my classmate


          I studies in Laguardia Commuity College, i am an international student from Algeria. To day, i meet a new classmate from Japan his name is TOMOTA, he came from Tokyo 3 years ago for working in TV Product here in New York, he lives in Austoria and wants stay here for couples of years but he finds that is difficult to live in this City becacuse is more expensive and the people are colder than his country.
we discuss about our goals, he want become a writer and he is interested by other culture and share wit 

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correction:


1. I studies in Laguardia Commuity College, 

-I study at LaGuardia Community College. 


2. I am an international student from Algeria. (period (.) not comma (,) between sentences 1 and 2. 


 3. To day, i meet a new classmate from Japan 

-Today I have met a new classmate from Japan. 

his name is TOMOTA, he came from Tokyo 3 years ago for working in TV Product here in New York, 

-His name is Tomota. He came from Tokyo three years ago to work in TV production here in New York. (Be careful to separate sentences with periods (.) not commas (,). If you prefer to connect the sentences with commas, you need conjunctions ("and," "but,"  "so" etc.)

he lives in Austoria and wants stay here for couples of years but he finds that is difficult to live in this City becacuse is more expensive and the people are colder than his country.

-He lives in Astoria and wants to stay here for a couple of years, but he finds that it is difficult to live in this city because it is more expensive and the people are colder than in his country. 

(Be careful of punctuation and capital letters (city is not a name; New York City is a name)


we discuss about our goals, he want become a writer and he is interested by other culture and share w...


-We discussed our goals. He wants to become a writer, and he is interested in other cultures and shares..





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