My classmate Anna lives and work in New York.she has been here over 2 1/2 years. she plans to move to Florida this year for better life and taxes relief. last yeas she want with her family to Peru for vacation and they liked it. before she come to New York she had lived in Poland. she goal is to be a good wife and mother and learn English for better life. If  she were Obama. she would make a better social help an


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My classmate Anna lives and work in New York.  (correct)

she has been here over 2 1/2 years. (start with a capital S)

she plans to move to Florida this year for better life and taxes relief.

-She plans to move to Florida this year for a better life and tax relief.

last yeas she want with her family to Peru for vacation and they liked it.

-Last year she went with her family to Peru, and they liked it.


before she come to New York she had lived in Poland. (start the sentence with a capital letter)


she goal is to be a good wife and mother and learn English for better life.

-Her goal is to be a good wife and mother and learn English for a better life.

If  she were Obama. she would make a better social help an

-If she were Obama, she would make better social help and..