Andres Zurita



   My classmate Zamim lives on New York. He lives anf works in Brooklyn New York. He has been here for over one year. He plans to stay on New york forever. He don't have worries. Last year he and his family went to Florida for vacation. Before he came to New York, Zamim had lived in Pennsylvania. His goal is to be a movie director. If he were Obama, he would make college free for all students.

   My name is Andres, i live and work in New York. i been here for over 8 years. I plan to stay on new York forever. I worrie every da aboit my family back on my c

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correction:

  My classmate Zamim lives on New York. 

-My classmate Zamin lives in New York. 

He lives anf works in Brooklyn New York. 

-He lives and works in Brooklyn, New York. 

He has been here for over one year. (correct)

He plans to stay on New york forever. 

-He plans to stay in New York forever. 

He don't have worries. 

-He doesn't have worries. (That's fantastic). 

Last year he and his family went to Florida for vacation. (correct)

Before he came to New York, Zamim had lived in Pennsylvania. (correct) 

His goal is to be a movie director. (correct)

If he were Obama, he would make college free for all students. (correct!)

   My name is Andres, i live and work in New York. i been here for over 8 years. I plan to stay on new York forever. I worrie every da aboit my family back on my c

-My name is Andres. I live and work in New York. I have been here for over 8 years. I play to stay in New York forever. I worry every day about my family back in my country.