DIANA PULIDO

Diana,

Thanks for writing about Guillermo, a student who has traveled and has a wide perspective on the world.

You should read the NEW VERSION of your writing and check the CHANGES, which I have written in CAPTAL LETTERS.

(new version)

Hi.

My classmate's name is Guillermo. He  is from Argentina. His parents LIVE in Barracas, (COMMA- ,- between city name and country name)  Argentina.  They live in Barracas a lot live ("a lot live"? did you mean "They have lived in Barracas for a long time"?)  His FATHER is 64 and his mother 65. They are lenient. HIS favorite subject in highschool WAS  the break because he COULD SPEAK (or "spend") more time with  his  classmates ... He CAME to New York TO study and live with his boyfriend. His plan to stay in  New York is work, study and live very  WELL and quietLY. He think  New York is FUN city and A good place for work. His favorite place in the world is Mexico because the food is delicious, the people ARE nice and THERE ARE several places TO know and nature is very  beautiful. Guillermo WRITES texT while he IS walking...

(original version)

Hi
My classmate's name is Guillermo. He  is from Argentina. His parents life in Barracas  Argentina.They live in Barracas a lot live. His pather is 64 and his mother 65. They are lenient. Your favorite subject in highschool is the break because he can speack more time with  his  classmates ... He come to New York for study and live with his boyfriend. His plan to stay in  New York is work, study and live very  good and quiet. He think of New York is funny city and good place for work. His favorite place in the world is Mexico because the food is delicious, the people is nice and have several places for know and nature is very  beautiful. Guillermo writing tex while he walking...