Flavio Guanoquiza

Flavio,

Thank you for writing here about your partner. You forgot to write his name, but I think I know who he is: Nuttharin, a young man from Thailand.

I have written a NEW VERSION of your writing with CHANGES in CAPITAL LETTERS. You should study them when you have time.

(new version)

The two parents are engaged in business. HIS father IS 60 years AND HIS mother 55. HIS parents LIVE IN TWO DIFFERENT COUNTRIES, he in THAILAND   AND she in Japan. HIS father is LENIENT and mother is very, very strict.

HIS FAVORITE subjectS in highschool WERE  all because THEY MAKE you think. HE came to New York because HE NEEDS TO study.

HIS PLAN TO stay  in New york is for 3 years. HE THINKS NEW YORK IS A WONDERFUL CITY.

HIS favorite place in the WORLD is THE bathroom because IT Is very relaxing.  

He  SOMETIMES TEXTS WHILE WALKING. 

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(original version)

The two parents are engaged in business your father have 60 years your mother 55 years.Your parents live he in Thailandia she in Japan. Your father is leniet and mother is very very strict.

Your favorit subject in highschool is all because makes you think. He came to New York because your need study.

He plan stay  in New york is for 3 years. he tinking abaut New York is de city Wonterfull

Your favorite place in the worlk is de bat bathroom becAUSE IS DE VERY RELAXIN 

HE  is somtimes text wile.