for Juan and Beer

Thanks for posting your ideas about hometown and neighborhood.

When you have time, you should look at the new version of your writing. I made some changes:


New Version

My name is Juan Felipe Sierra and my partner is Beer.

His hometown is Thailand. He told me that in his country the most pupular religion is Buddhism.


The favorites thing of New York of my partner is that it is a big city and you can find anything here.
He thinks that you can meet people from all countries and learn some words in other languages.
This is his first time in United States, so he is looking for some new experiences in this country



Beer lives in the neighborhood of Astoria, located in queens.He moved to New York two weeks ago and he lives alone because the doesn't have any friends yet.



I hope he is having a good time in NYC and to learn more about him and his culture.
Maybe someday I will invite him for some Colombia drinks :)


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My name is Juan Felipe Sierra and my partner is Beer.

His hometown is Thailand,he told me thtat in his country the most pupular relugion is budish.


The favorites thing of new york of my partner is that is a big city and you can find anything here
he think that you can meet people for all contries and learn some words in other lenguage
this is his first time in United States so he is looking for some new axpirences in this country



Beer lives in Astoria neightboor located in queens.He move to New York two weeks ago and he lives
alone because the dosent have any friends yet.



I hope he is having a good time in NYC and learn more about him and his culture
maybe someday i will invite him some colombians drinks :)